At a California church, a sort of holy war

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  • Danny Chipman Lehi, UT
    July 24, 2012 12:58 p.m.

    Miss Powers, your writing style is much more suited to prose than to journalism. I'm sure you merely wanted your readers to connect with the story on a human level, but the flowery diction and metaphors only serve to distract from the story and come off as unprofessional. Perhaps you might try writing novels instead.