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Published: Monday, July 23 2012 12:00 a.m. MDT

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Danny Chipman
Lehi, UT

Miss Powers, your writing style is much more suited to prose than to journalism. I'm sure you merely wanted your readers to connect with the story on a human level, but the flowery diction and metaphors only serve to distract from the story and come off as unprofessional. Perhaps you might try writing novels instead.

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