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Author offers 6 tips to make writing more interesting

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By Carma Wadley, Deseret News

Published: Sunday, Sept. 26 2010 3:00 p.m. MDT

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Benjamin Franklin advised: "If you would not be forgotten as soon as you are dead, either write things worth reading or do things worth writing."

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3. Re-create your world, or your ancestors' world, so readers can visualize places, styles, attitudes and such. This requires some research, but it is a fun part of the process, says Thurston. You can look at old newspapers, go online, look at scrapbooks. "Try to create everyday life in that time. Look at what was going on in the world. Find things that were a cause for specific actions."

4. Write at the gut level, revealing how your experiences affected you, and infusing your story with warmth and humanity. "Sometimes we are afraid to do that. We're told not to air our dirty laundry. Some people also think that admitting weaknesses may give their children permission to do the same," she says. "But if you appear human, you will touch your readers more."

Talk about how you felt when things happened, how events shaped you, she says. Talk about lessons you learned.

"One of my students taught engineering at a university, and he said it well: 'My children only know me after I reached success. What I want them to know is how hard it was to get there.' "

5. Keep your readers turning pages by applying the techniques used by suspense writers. If you are talking about a crisis, don't reveal what happened right away, says Thurston. "Let your readers experience it with you. Most books try to end chapters on an exciting note, so you will keep reading."

6. Begin with a bang, with an opening that makes readers think, "This is going to be a great story!"

People often start with the backstory, she said. "It's better to start with a big event than with everything leading up to it. You can add that later. When Sheri Dew wrote the biography of President Hinckley, she didn't start with when he was born. She started with the press conference announcing he would be the next church president."

Family history has become a very popular pastime in recent years, says Thurston. She has been teaching for 15 years, "and I'm amazed at how much interest there is in doing it. But it is such a satisfying thing to do."

Most people want to write for their descendents, so those people will come to know them better. "But if you write a dull, lifeless story that no one wants to read," says Thurston, "that kind of defeats the purpose."

e-mail: carma@desnews.com

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LuVePacifica
SaltLakeCity, Utah

My life is one big chapter'of where it all begin'
thanks for the article would be,of
great interest.
As to write a small novel of where it all started with in family tree of ours..

  • 4:39 p.m. Sept. 26, 2010
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Ethel
Lindon, UT

This is a great article. I look forward to the workshop and or reading the book mentioned. Thank you. I am a blogger and always looking for ways to improve and bring interest into what I write. I love doing stories for my personal and family More..

  • 6:16 a.m. Sept. 27, 2010
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Kitenoa
Salt Lake City, UT

My mother will turn 93 years young this October 2010. She still walks the hallways at home although gingerly. She is the last evacuee from her village still living after a volcanic eruption tore through her village home some 81 years ago.

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  • 7:19 a.m. Sept. 27, 2010
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Deseret News Senior Writer Carma Wadley has enjoyed a career in journalism that has gone from linotype and hot lead to computers and social media. She did consumer writing for a number of years and served as Feature more ..

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